Editors mock black teen's death

The overpaid Garfield police chief, at left on phone, gets word that a suspect ran out of an unlocked police station door and three officers could not catch him.

On The Record's front-page today, four big photos showing a black suspect fleeing the Garfield police station focus on a comedic Keystone Kops chase -- not the confrontation with officers who shot him dead.

The story and photos take up most of Page 1, but the text is so poorly edited, there are several major flaws -- typical of the assignment desk under Editor Deirdre Sykes and the news copy desk under Editor Liz Houlton.

Sykes and Houlton continue to make Editor Marty Gottlieb look bad as the ex-Timesman completes his second month at the Woodland Park daily.

The use of "TALE OF THE TAPE" -- a sports term -- in a kicker over the main headline seems inappropriate over a story about the controversial shooting of Malik Williams, 19. The phrase mocks the victim.

Why not just use the phrase "COPS' VIDEO TAPE" or something similar?

'Unspecified tools'

Three months and 10 days after the fatal police shooting, The Record continues to report Williams "allegedly had armed himself with unspecified tools" on Dec. 10, 2011 (A-1). 

But on the continuation page (A-6), the paper quotes the two "use of force" reports it obtained from police recently, alleging Williams attacked an officer with a "blunt object" and a "knife/cutting object."

That conflicts badly with "unspecified tools" on the front page. Where are Houlton and her copy editors? Are they so in awe of Sykes, they ignore such glaring conflicts in a story?

Who owns garage?

Also on A-6, a large photo of the detached garage behind a Dahnert Park Lane home is shown. The caption says Williams was shot "near" the garage. The graphic just under the photo says he was shot "in" the garage.

The laziness and incompetency of Sykes and her minions have been exposed by coverage of the Williams shooting.

In the past 100 days -- instead of looking for witnesses to the shooting or interviewing the owner of the garage on what he or she might have seen -- the paper merely regurgitated bare-bones press releases from Bergen County Prosecutor John Molinelli as he tried mightily to cover the asses of all of the police officers involved.

Breaking weather news

On the front of Local today, Sykes delivers the breathless news that we've had our "warmest winter ever" -- which anyone who watches TV news already knows.

Former Hackensack reporter Monsy Alvarado is back with a ridiculous story on "two tragedies" in Palisades Park -- the unintended suicide of a priest who fell asleep while smoking and the "beheading" of a statue at another church in the borough.

Death and vandalism

How can the desperate Sykes have the nerve to compare the untimely demise of the Rev. James F. Reilly to vandalism, especially when the paper appears to have no intention of using his meaningless death to illustrate the dangers of smoking. 

Sykes continues to nibble around the edges of Hackensack for local news, but there is nothing from the county seat itself.

Developer had sole

On L-6, a local obituary on land developer and footwear inventor Eli Cohen, formerly of Paramus, fails to note that his shock-absorbing running shoes had only limited commercial success.

In a bid to capitalize on the Nike name, Cohen named them "Nebbishy."

Highway businesses

On L-7, the first Business page, a story on businesses filling "retail space" in Parmaus, doesn't explain the 24 Hour Fitness health club opened in a building that once housed a multiplex movie theater, not a big-box store.

The story does tell readers a second New York-based Fairway Market is expected to open in June on Route 46 in Woodland Park -- in a former Pathmark.

The paper's commercial real estate coverage continues to virtually ignore struggling downtowns in Hackensack, Teaneck and Englewood.

'Pushing a bucket of turds up the hill'

Image via Wikipedia

The Record's many turd-filled wheelbarrows have flat tires.

Nancy Cherry supervised me when I was a news copy editor at The Record, and for years, she urged the newspaper to highlight a "Quote of the Day" from the stories we edited night after night. 

Of course, Nancy, Co-Slot Vinny Byrne and everybody else associated with the news copy desk were treated like so much shit by Editor Francis Scandale, head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes and their minions, and her idea went nowhere. A couple of years ago, the former Hackensack daily began running great quotes weekly, not daily.

Today, on the front page, a "Quote of the Day" jumped out at me, and it resonates with meaning on so many levels:

"This is like pushing a bucket of turds up the hill and the wheelbarrow has flat tires," said not-quite-Sisyphus Thomas J. Powell, one of the Passaic Valley sewerage commissioners who resigned, explaining he didn't have the strength to fight ethics charges threatened by Governor Christie.

You can apply this quote to readers, who are saddled every day with a newspaper that slants stories to make Christie look great, that raises questions and never answers them, that writes inaccurate headlines and rarely corrects them, and that day after day, allows the laziness of the editors and some of the staff to determine what's covered.  

If you think of a wheelbarrow as a conveyance, then the turds could represent the flawed stories written by everyone from Washington Correspondent Herb Jackson down to the inexperienced weekly reporters whose stories fill Sykes' Local section.

If you think of a wheelbarrow as representing the newsroom, then the turds could be Scandale and  all of the clueless assignment and features editors, as well as reporters like Jean Rimbach who do as little as possible and get away with it, because they are Sykes' pals.

If you think of a wheelbarrow as management, then the turds could be Jennifer A. and Stephen A.  Borg, the spoiled siblings who pushed their ailing father aside and started the hometown paper down a slippery slope of cost-cutting and bare-bones municipal news coverage.

A turd from D.C.

Just look at the turd that leads the Woodland Park paper today, reported and written by Jackson, one of the staffers who make the mistake of thinking readers are as fascinated by politics as they are, and that every story has to be defined by how many tax dollars are spent improperly. 

The headline is ridiculous. Who can figure out what the story is about?

Taxpayer

time spent

helping

campaigns

The drop headline tells readers more, but awkwardly:

Bush aides improperly

aided in N.J., report says

What is "taxpayer time"? Whose campaigns? "Improperly aided in N.J."? 

Why not just say -- in the head and in the lead paragraph -- that Bush officials broke the law to campaign for New Jersey Republicans. 

Jackson wrote this Page 1 turd, but who edited it? Was it Sykes, who would let out shrieks of laughter when she was on the phone editing stories by Jackson and the Trenton reporters? Or was she in the bathroom, eliminating her own turds, when this story just went through with no thought at all given to clarity and grabbing the reader?

History repeats itself

At a news meeting 10 years ago, shortly after moving from Denver to take over as editor, Scandale assessed how well his new staff had done on covering a major snowstorm. He was pissed.

Nothing has changed. Many towns did a poor job of clearing streets, sidewalks and bus stops after the post-Christmas blizzard that hit North Jersey at the end of 2010, and The Record's coverage was as inadequate as it was in 2001.

On A-10, a letter to the editor from Ciro DiSclafani of Garfield asks, "How pedestrian-friendly is your town?" 

It's the paper that should be reporting what this man says in his letter about "improperly cleared intersections and bus stops," and the dangers to pedestrians, mothers with strollers and others who are forced into the street. 

If you drove around Hackensack today, as I did, it was immediately apparent that city crews did a poor job on intersections and bus stops, just as they did after the blizzard and other major storms.

Snowplows appear to crisscross each other, but not turn corners, leaving a mess at intersections that forces pedestrians to wade through a foot or more of snow and drivers to make wide turns. Euclid Avenue, an unusually wide street with two-way traffic, was reduced to one lane.

If anyone should be sympathetic to pedestrians having to cope with snow, it would be Sykes, who fell on her well-padded posterior in the Hackensack parking lot one winter. 

It's true that one of her reporters, Karen Rouse, wrote about pedestrians recently, but she didn't venture any farther than a few blocks from her Hackensack apartment.

Rich and powerful

The 2011 PEOPLE TO WATCH feature today focuses on one of the richest, most powerful men in North Jersey, appropriately "brought to you by" a luxury car dealer's ad above the fold. Check out the photo of Orin S. Kramer in his $3,000 suit.

It took Sykes and her staff about six weeks to notice how many homeless people have been wandering around in the cold this winter, and today, we get the second major story in three days on their plight (L-1).

Poor reporting

On L-3 today, Staff Writer Shawn Boburg finally contacted a railroad spokeswoman to confirm that warning lights were working properly at the Franklin Lakes crossing where a man drove his SUV into a moving train, killing his friend.

In his major story on Wednesday, Boburg left conflicting information on the warning lights unresolved, and no editor noticed or cared.

Unfair to Fairway

The second round of marinara-sauce testing by the Better Living staff today again omits the great sauce sold under the Fairway Market label in Paramus.