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On The Record's front-page today, four big photos showing a black suspect fleeing the Garfield police station focus on a comedic Keystone Kops chase -- not the confrontation with officers who shot him dead.
The
story and photos take up most of Page 1, but the text is so poorly
edited, there are several major flaws -- typical of the assignment desk
under Editor Deirdre Sykes and the news copy desk under Editor Liz
Houlton.
The
use of "TALE OF THE TAPE" -- a sports term -- in a kicker over the main
headline seems inappropriate over a story about the controversial
shooting of Malik Williams, 19. The phrase mocks the victim.
Why not just use the phrase "COPS' VIDEO TAPE" or something similar?
'Unspecified tools'
Three
months and 10 days after the fatal police shooting, The Record
continues to report Williams "allegedly had armed himself with
unspecified tools" on Dec. 10, 2011 (A-1).
But on the continuation page (A-6),
the paper quotes the two "use of force" reports it obtained from police
recently, alleging Williams attacked an officer with a "blunt object"
and a "knife/cutting object."
That
conflicts badly with "unspecified tools" on the front page. Where are
Houlton and her copy editors? Are they so in awe of Sykes, they ignore
such glaring conflicts in a story?
Who owns garage?
Also
on A-6, a large photo of the detached garage behind a Dahnert Park Lane
home is shown. The caption says Williams was shot "near" the garage.
The graphic just under the photo says he was shot "in" the garage.
The laziness and incompetency of Sykes and her minions have been exposed by coverage of the Williams shooting.
In
the past 100 days -- instead of looking for witnesses to the shooting
or interviewing the owner of the garage on what he or she might have
seen -- the paper merely regurgitated bare-bones press releases from
Bergen County Prosecutor John Molinelli as he tried mightily to cover
the asses of all of the police officers involved.
Breaking weather news
On
the front of Local today, Sykes delivers the breathless news that we've
had our "warmest winter ever" -- which anyone who watches TV news
already knows.
Former
Hackensack reporter Monsy Alvarado is back with a ridiculous story on
"two tragedies" in Palisades Park -- the unintended suicide of a priest
who fell asleep while smoking and the "beheading" of a statue at another
church in the borough.
Death and vandalism
How
can the desperate Sykes have the nerve to compare the untimely demise of the Rev. James F.
Reilly to vandalism, especially when the paper appears to have no
intention of using his meaningless death to illustrate the dangers of
smoking.
Sykes continues to nibble around the edges of Hackensack for local news, but there is nothing from the county seat itself.
Developer had sole
On
L-6, a local obituary on land developer and footwear inventor Eli
Cohen, formerly of Paramus, fails to note that his shock-absorbing
running shoes had only limited commercial success.
In a bid to capitalize on the Nike name, Cohen named them "Nebbishy."
Highway businesses
On
L-7, the first Business page, a story on businesses filling "retail
space" in Parmaus, doesn't explain the 24 Hour Fitness health club
opened in a building that once housed a multiplex movie theater, not a
big-box store.
The
story does tell readers a second New York-based Fairway Market is
expected to open in June on Route 46 in Woodland Park -- in a former
Pathmark.
The
paper's commercial real estate coverage continues to virtually ignore
struggling downtowns in Hackensack, Teaneck and Englewood.
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