Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Did editors help reach historic moment?

Seal of Bergen County, New Jersey
Seal of Bergen County (Photo credit: Wikipedia)



Home-rule government has long been one of the sacred cows at The Record, which made its reputation as a local newspaper by covering just about every meeting in just about every town in Bergen and Passaic counties.


Small towns fought hard to preserve their individuality and neighborhood schools, but home rule is inefficient and expensive, resulting in high property taxes.

Except for a series on municipal finance -- the infamous "Mun-Fin" in the 1980s -- The Record has stood by as towns have resisted consolidation of any kind and taxes have gone up year after year.

Today, Editor Marty Gottlieb leads the paper with the historic vote to dissolve the Demarest Police Department and merge it with the Bergen County police (A-1).
 
Borough officials say the plan will save $400,000 in police costs, an unknown amount of that in donuts, which the county buys in bulk at a lower price.

The first paragraph calls the vote a "historic first for Bergen County," but on A-8, readers learn Teterboro disbanded its police force in 1992 and contracted with the county for full-time coverage.

So, maybe "historic second" would be more accurate.

But readers long ago gave up the expectation of accuracy under Production Editor Liz Houlton and her band of merry copy editors, even in Page 1 stories.

Shafting readers

Gottlieb also pushed a sports story for the front page today: Alex Rodriguez' career may be nearing an end now that he's thrown out his hip during sexual activity (A-1).

Can't you just hear the snickers among the tabloid copy editors who coined "A-Rod" to fit short-count headlines -- a nickname that hints at his sexual prowess?  

There is so little municipal news in Local, head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes and her deputy, Dan Sforza, had to use a big photo on L-3 -- the latest saga in utility pole news.

Mass hysteria

Monday's front page continued the Woodland Park daily's unprecedented coverage of mass transit, but the bus and rail system maxed out long before Superstorm Sandy damaged hundreds of NJ Transit locomotives and rail cars. 

The editors acknowledge how little they've covered mass transit in the past decade by inserting the word "commuter" before "locomotives and railcars," lest readers think NJ Transit transported cattle, bottled water or organic spring mix.


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'Spic Paterson' and other comments

English: Downtown Paterson
Paterson (Photo credit: Wikipedia)



Editor's note: Whether you're a blogger or a newspaper reporter, one thing is clear. Many of your readers are racist or just out of their freaking minds. That's especially true of readers who hide behind the 'Anonymous' tag. Here are a few of the reactions I've received to posts at Eye on The Record.


In response to commentary on an affordable housing story, a reader who apparently lives in affluent Sadde River had this to say:
 

"Well, you can see the difference between all white Saddle River and all black and spic Paterson."

Later, I received another comment, apparently from this same racist, concerning my complaints The Record is doing a poor job of covering Hackensack:

"I am living in almost pure white luxury and you are in boogie land crying for coverage of a city no one cares about."

I cited this passage from the affordable housing story:

"New Jersey remains one of the most racially and economically segregated regions of the country."


 And got this comment:


"And lets hope it stays that way.

"My town, Saddle River, was one of the first to challenge Mount Laurel."



PSE&G 
  
On criticism of PSE&G's slow repairs after Superstorm Sandy hit:

"They did a great job who are you kidding? You do know it was a once in a lifetime storm?" 


Math errors 

On math errors in a Page 1 story:


"I guess math isn't the reporters/editors strong suit and the reason they decided to become journalists instead of mathematicians."


Other errors

As errors continue to mount in headlines, photo captions and stories, one reader claimed Production Editor Liz Houlton, supervisor of the copy desk, is "universally respected," but didn't say in which universe.

Sunday, December 2, 2012

A tax headline only Christie could love

Christie at a town hall meeting in Union City,...
Governor Christie in Union City on Feb. 9, 2011. (Wikipedia)



Chris Christie has a photo of Liz Houlton, The Record's production editor, on his desk in Trenton, next to photos of Columnist Charles Stile, Editorial Page Editor Alfred P. Doblin and Opinion Page contributor Carl Golden.

He's been planting wet kisses on all of the photos to thank the Woodland Park daily for all the propaganda it has been printing since he became governor in January 2010.

Today, Houlton made sure her copy editors didn't betray the governor by writing a headline that gave away a 2012 property tax increase of about 2 percent in most towns in Bergen and Passaic counties (A-1).



'Property tax
hikes kept
in check for 
second year'  



"Kept in check" means "stopped," but the tax increases haven't stopped, as the story reports, so how can Houlton and Editor Marty Gottlieb justify this inaccurate headline?

Golden moments

Take a look at the big photo of Christie -- his face sagging with fat -- on the front of Opinion (O-1).

One reason he's laughing is the Opinion piece with the photo that was written by Carl Golden, a former press aide to two other Republican governors, Tom Kean and Christie Whitman, two of the worst chief executives the state has ever had.

It's hard to believe the paper can't find anyone but the clearly biased Golden to assess Christie's chances for a second term.

Kelly on the mend 

Also on the Opinion front today, readers learn Columnist Mike Kelly is still away "from the office on a short leave" -- another way of saying he continues to recover from a heart attack.

Hey, Kelly. No rush. You're not missed by readers. You're health is more important than any column you could possibly write, if past performance is any guide.

I hope you're watching your diet, and not looking for guidance from the paper's food pages, which are filled with recipes using cream, butter, bacon and other artery clogging ingredients.

A new Rimbach opus

If you've been wondering what the paper's least productive reporter has been doing, take a look at today's huge front-page story and the two-page spread inside the paper on "a tattered mob case."

The last time head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes and her favorite reporter, Staff Writer Jean Rimbach, tried to take down Michael Mordaga, retired Bergen County chief of detectives, the investigation dragged on for nearly 3 years and cost an estimated $500,000 in staff salaries.

But the November 2009 story was so weak, it appeared on the Local section front, not A-1. There's no telling how long today's opus has been in the works.

Toll on readers

On today's Local front, a story on the second phase of a Hudson River toll increase (to $13 from $12) makes no mention of how ineffective Christie was in stopping the Port Authority hikes (L-1).

Maybe, the governor made a deal to allow the initial 50% hike last year and not oppose subsequent hikes in return for several high paying jobs for his cronies.


What about discounts?
 
In typical Record fashion, the story mentions nothing about the car-pool discount available at any time of the day or night or the discount available to drivers of hybrid cars with a Green E-ZPass.

Off-peak, drivers with a Green Pass pay only $4.75, compared to $8.25 for other E-ZPass holders. Car-poolers with E-ZPass pay only $4.25 at all hours.

Here is the scoop from the Port Authority Web site on getting the car-pool discount: 

  • To register for the Carpool Plan, call 800-333-8655 (New York Service Center) or 888-288-6865 (New Jersey Service Center). Be sure to have your account number or tag number and PIN for account access.
  • Three or more people must be in a vehicle to be eligible for the discount (no commercial vehicles qualify).
  • Customers must use a staffed "Cash-E-ZPass" toll lane and come to a complete stop so the toll collector can verify the number of occupants in the vehicle.

Fattening up
 
In Better Living today, Restaurant Reviewer Elisa Ung tells readers her goal is to get even fatter (BL-4).

She's hoping for a gift ice cream "membership."

On Friday, Ung panned Miller's N.J. Ale House on Route 4 in Paramus, saying you should only go for "inexpensive beer specials" and "fudgy ice cream cake," not for the oversalted food.

It's clear Ung has never visited a gym, because she neglects to tell readers all this unhealthy food is available only steps from 24 Hour Fitness, one of the biggest gyms in North Jersey. 

Hang up on Road Warrior

A concerned reader has sent another e-mail to Staff Writer John Cichowski and management, alerting them to errors in the latest Road Warrior column.

An edited version of the e-mail appears below:   

"Once again, the Road Warrior reports misleading and false information and further confuses readers by misstating facts. 

"The Road Warrior provided some good reporting about the status of cracking down on illegal cell phone use, but he does further injustice with key omissions that should be even more important to readers and drivers. 

"This was a major investigative report and there was NO excuse NOT to mention the cited key omissions.

"His Dec. 1 column is the 20th article with problems, starting with his 9/12 article, about which I've notified The Record's management and the Road Warrior without indication of any preventive actions to address these problems and very few published corrections.

"It's time for answers, corrections and solutions.

1.  Reported information - The column's major premise starts with the question, "Do police really enforce the ban on driving with hand-held cell-phones?" and indicated "N.J,'s cell phone law produced 87,142 tickets during the 12 months ending in October."

"KEY OMISSION -- Road Warrior failed to report a key fact that police had previously been issuing approximately 10,000 cell phone tickets per month since the law took effect in 2008.  The column should have then mentioned a significant 27.4% drop (~120,000 vs. 87,142 per year) in cell phone tickets in the past year that clearly shows that problems due to the lack of police enforcing this ban is getting progressively worse. These facts were key to the column's premise noted above.

2. Reported information - "The law carries a $100 fine"

"KEY OMISSION -- Road Warrior failed to mention the Kulesh, Kubert and Bolis Law was signed into law in July and designates illegal use of hand-held cell phones (as defined by driver cell phone statutes), including speaking and texting, as factors that can be cited in a crime of reckless driving.  That crime can lead to imprisonment of 5 to 10 years, a fine of up to $150,000, or both, if there is a fatality, or up to 18 months imprisonment, a fine of up to $10,000, or both, if there is a serious injury.

"Omission of this major information seems to be negligent reporting since this MAJOR transformational, tougher law, if properly publicized, should clearly rank with the publicity allotted to much tougher DWI laws that helped reduce DWI injuries and deaths due to making people aware of the severe consequences on people's lives if they violated the law.  Mentioning a simple $100 fine pales in comparison in getting any reader's attention.

3. Reported information -- "Others cite such enforcement [of hand-held cell phone use and other distracted behaviors] as a genuine safety priority, given the 178 road deaths attributed to distracted driving in New Jersey last year"

"KEY OMISSION -- However, Road Warrior failed to mention illegal cell phone use so far has been cited in a small percentage of total deaths due to distracted driving, which includes a wide range of distractions.  There were 6 reported deaths due to illegal cell phone use in 2009, when 157 deaths were attributed to distracted driving.  The Road Warrior should not scare readers with a high number that is based mostly on distractions, which are NOT due to cell phones.

"For reference by the Road Warrior, there were approximately 6 deaths per year, which were less than 5% of deaths due to distracted driving, due to illegal cell phone use in the first 2 years after the new cell phone laws were implemented.  While some state data has indicated that crashes involving cell phone use are around 1% of all crashes, this data probably under reports actual cell phone usage since sometimes it is difficult to ascertain this fact after a crash. 

4. Misleading statement due to key missing information -- "The law carries a $100 fine that would double under a bill that passed the Senate and awaits action by an Assembly committee."

"CORRECT FACTS -- The law carries a $100 fine, which would eventually go up 6 times to $600 with possible license suspension for 90 days and 3 points on a driver's license under a bill that passed the Senate and awaits action by an Assembly committee.  This more accurately depicts the potential imminent significance to readers and drivers rather than the almost inconsequential mention of the insignificant potential doubling of the fine to $200.  The bill would double the fine for first time offenders, quadruple the fine for second time offenders, and impose the maximum stated penalties for 3 or more offenses in a 10-year period from the first offense.

5. False statement - There were "178 road deaths attributed to distracted driving in New Jersey last year — nearly one-quarter of the total death count."

"CORRECT FACTS - There were 178 road deaths attributed to distracted driving in New Jersey last year --  28.4% (more than one-quarter) of the total death count of 627.  I'm still not sure how these mathematically challenged, false calculations continually appear in the Road Warrior columns.  

"Does anybody at The Record own a calculator to check if his reported calculated figures are ever correct?"
  

Saturday, December 1, 2012

What's all this fuss about cops and cellphones?

English: use of cellphones (mobile phone)is pr...
(Photo credit: Wikipedia)



You have to hand it to Road Warrior John Cichowski, who has invented so many ways in the past nine years to avoid reporting on the twin crises of choking traffic congestion and inadequate mass transit.

He has searched high (tree trimming and roof snow) and low (potholes) for column topics that require a minimum of legwork and a maximum of ass time in front of the computer.

His piece on Page 1 of The Record today is about as far off  commuting issues as you can get, but it also suffers from confusing headlines and photos.



'A tough call for cops'



When I saw that headline over dark, indistinct photos of men and women on cellphones in their cars, I immediately thought the story was about the many officers I've seen talking on their cellphones in police cruisers.

But The Record's editors would never come down that hard on cops, who they depend on for timely release of information about crime to fill local-news pages.

In the same way, Cichowski has completely ignored lax enforcement of speeding, tailgating and other laws on highways, lest he alienate the state police.

Is the supposed lack of enforcement over talking on cellphones while driving such a big deal that it takes up most of Page 1 today?

The same could be said about Friday's huge front-page element on the Rutgers football team -- bigger than any other story on A-1.

Or today's story on rival Catholic school football teams (A-1).

Hang up the phone

Are these the stories Editor Marty Gottlieb thinks North Jersey residents really want to see on Page 1 day after day? 

What they want to see are stories that don't mask the abysmal failure of Governor Chrsitie to lower property taxes, as he promised when he ran for office.

And examinations of why Christie and the Port Authority -- the bistate transportation agency he has packed with his cronies -- have blocked major expansions of the rail and bus systems.

And they want to see stories based on legwork, not those, like today's Road Warrior farce, based completely on telephone interviews.

Hey, Cichowski, readers want you to hang up the phone, get off your lardy ass and go see for yourself what a mess commuting is these days. 

Black and white

On Friday, The Record continued to report the refusal of Palisade Park and Leonia police chiefs to disclose the names of the three officers who shot dead robbery suspect Rickey McFadden, 47, of Leonia last Sunday (L-1).

If Bergen County Prosecutor John L. Molinelli is in charge of the probe, why is he deferring to the police chiefs on the release of the names?

So, can readers assume it is a case of three white officers killing another black man, and that there's no rush since the suspect was African-American?

Remember how long it took to identify the cops who killed Malik Williams, 19, of Garfield in December 2011? 

Reporting lessons 

Two stories on the Englewood school district appear in today's Local news section from head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes and Deputy Assignment Editor Dan Sforza.

An L-1 story doesn't explain why the Englewood Board of Education couldn't find an assistant superintendent from a district other than Paterson, where failed schools have been under state supervision for years. 

Please fire someone

The caption under a huge photo of a bus fire on L-1 today is incorrect in saying Route 17 north traffic was restricted to "one lane."

I'm sure I wasn't the only driver on Route 17 south who saw that the highway's northbound lanes were completely closed down -- to the chagrin of thousands of drivers.

Unanswered is why so many first responders were at the scene of a spectacular fire that injured no one or why The Record's inept copy desk under Editor Liz Houlton calls the incident a "disaster."  

Calling it a "disaster" helps Sykes and Sforza justify running such a big fire photo in place of local news they are too lazy to find. 

The "disaster" is the paper's copy desk.

Hackensack news

The only Hackensack news today is a 7- or 8- paragraph item on L-3 about a collision between a fire rescue truck and an SUV that ran a stop sign.

Just think. The Road Warrior can jump on those types of collisions for his next Page 1 column.

More questions

A second L-3 story doesn't answer obvious questions: 

Why did the Bergen County Board of Social Services hire a $140,000-a-year "interim management consultant" all the way from Miami Lakes, Fla.?

Alex Morales is in line to become the agency's executive director.

Couldn't the agency's board find a qualified Hispanic in New Jersey, where the unemployment rate tops 9 percent? Who does Morales know?  

Morales' salary is only $1,000 a year less than what Christie is paying his new Superstorm Sandy recovery "czar."

Boy, does this stink. 

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