Showing posts with label Zach Patberg. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Zach Patberg. Show all posts

Monday, June 27, 2011

Reporting the news by the numbers

Malia Obama makes her way through the crowd at...Image via Wikipedia
Bill Ervolino's blog on northjersey.com was shut down in 2010 after he made an inappropriate comment about Malia Obama, above. Now, The Record staff writer has won first place for humor columns.


By VICTOR E. SASSON
EDITOR

Is it just coincidence, desperation or inept planning?


The three major stories on the front page of The Record today are jammed pack with so many numbers you'd think the paper was catering to CPAs.


Editor Francis Scandale's by-the-numbers stories on a municipal ticket blitz, a public-school staff exodus and home foreclosures  follow by one day a mind-numbing, numbers-crunching A-1 piece on funding for road and transit projects.


Eye patch


For the A-1 patch today, Staff Writer Zach Patberg interviewed drivers who complained about getting summonses, but didn't talk to taxpayers who welcome any extra revenue in their inefficient, home-rule communities. 


Of course, even tens of thousands of extra dollars don't justify the bloated salaries and benefits of local police chiefs. 


But ticket quotas? Red-light cameras? What's not to love?


An A-2 correction fixes the embarrassing error in a front-page caption Sunday that said a middle-age woman was 3 years old.


On A-11, both cartoonist Margulies and Editorial Page Editor Alfred P. Doblin weigh in on the giveaway of NJN by Governor Christie.


I've said NJN's evening news show can be boring, but I found last week's coverage of the budget crisis in Trenton more compelling than what I saw in the Woodland Park daily.


In view of today's deadly dull front page, why relegate the killing of a gas station owner from Paramus over $4 to Local -- unless Editor Deirdre Sykes' assignment desk had nothing else (L-1)?


Sykes had no Hackensack or Teaneck news for today's section, but made sure she found room for a revaluation story from her hometown of Harrington Park (L-6).


They win, we lose


What can you say about journalism awards? 


A bunch of editors and reporters get together to pat each other on the back, ignoring readers who howl over the crappy prose they turn out day after day.


Now, the National Society of Newspaper Columnists, which I've never heard of before, reveals its 2011 contest winners for work published in 2010.


"The society’s traditional top prize (its Best Motion Picture or Album of the Year, if you please) is for general-interest columns in large newspapers. 


"First prize this year went to Mike Kelly of The Record of Bergen County, N.J. 


"The judge’s comments included this: 'These are what metro columns should be: elegantly written, with a clear point of view, but — above all — well-reported.'"


Many readers believe Kelly just pushes around words and is a terrible reporter, as he showed recently in a column about noise from planes that use Teterboro Airport.


He wrote that noisy business jets "float" before landing, and described Hackensack as a city of "working-class neighborhoods."


In a major piece on Asbury Park for The Sunday Record in 2000, Kelly failed miserably as a journalist by not saying a single word about the urban gays who were leading the way on reviving the faded shore resort -- as reported by The New York Times the very same day. 


Yeah, he's some reporter.


Bill Ervolino of The Record won first place for humor columns in newspapers with over 50,000 circulation.


The society's Web site is silent on Ervolino's blog, which northjersey.com shut down in 2010 after he made an inappropriate comment about President Obama's daughter, Malia.


Maybe the award to Ervolino should be for perverted humor.

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Friday, March 11, 2011

Where did editors find elusive reporter?

Seal of Bergen County, New JerseyImage via Wikipedia
"You won't have to worry about reporter Jean Rimbach," the Indian tells the colonist.

Did Staff Writer Jean Rimbach hibernate longer than the bears this winter? You can count her recent bylines on the fingers of one hand.

In some years, you can count her stories in The Record on an amputee's hand.

Where did Editor Francis Scandale and head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes find her on Thursday to report and write today's Page 1 story on the taped conversation between the tower and a small-plane pilot who landed on Route 80 about six weeks ago?

Does she rest her head on her desk in the Woodland Park newsroom, take long lunches, monitor the news from home or just look busy? 

Rimbach is another example of how far you can go at the former Hackensack daily by doing little or nothing, as long as you are a pal of Sykes, as she is.

But let's cut to the chase. This landing wasn't dramatic and no one was injured. 

Why is the story on A-1? As I said when it was splashed all over the front page on Feb. 1, this is not Bergen County's version of the passenger jet that belly-flopped into the Hudson.

Hearing on Italians

Another A-1 story today reports Republican Rep. Peter King "declared that U.S.Muslims are doing too little to help fight terror in America." 

What's next, hearings on whether U.S. Italians are doing enough to help fight the Mafia, followed by hearings on what U.S. Mexicans are doing to help fight drug-cartel violence? Give me a break.

Sloppy copy editing

The AP story on the King hearing calls him "Republican Rep. Peter King, R-N.Y.," giving his party affiliation twice, like bookends.

The A-1 flooding story uses one of the most overused headline words around, "brace." It's a close second to "woes." But it's readers who have to brace for this edition.

In Staff Writer Zach Patberg's story on illegal Mexican immigrant Vidal Tapia, he reports "Tapia was beckoned" to the United States from a small town in Puebla state. 

He must have excellent vision to have seen his parents signaling or summoning him as by nodding or waving. Maybe they use Skype.

Two more corrections appear on A-2 today, in what seems to be an uninterrupted stream lately.

Home-rule wonder

You know home rule is a joke when somebody like Anthony Suarez can become mayor of Ridgefield.  

A story on A-10 reports a federal lawsuit seeking about $100 million in flood-relief aid was dismissed "almost a year ago," because Suarez, the former Saddle Brook Township attorney, "failed to file routine paperwork." Why isn't this on A-1?

Readers in Hackensack, Teaneck, Englewood and other communities are let down for another day by Sykes' Local section, which has no news for them.

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