Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Looking strangely like a tabloid

Monmouth Park Racetrack
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Governor Christie is seriously weighing a horse race pitting GOP presidential hopefuls against each other around the Monmouth Park track.


Interim Editor Doug Clancy is big on crime news, leading The Record's front page three days in a row with the fatal police shooting of a Garfield suspect or the murder of a Wood-Ridge man, allegedly by an ex-cop.


Gee whiz. If an ex-cop is committing crime, are any of us safe? 


Clancy doesn't seem to have much else for Page 1.


Horse manure 


He's given Staff Writer John Brennan precious A-1 space to report Governor Christie is threatening to close Monmouth Park and The Meadowlands horse-racing tracks unless they are privatized real soon.


Does anyone care about this so-called crisis besides Brennan, a horse's ass, and a small minority of readers?


A photo at the bottom of A-1 shows two elitist horse's asses -- Christie and Republican hopeful Mitt Romney (A-6 story and A-12 cartoon). 


Why is who the GOP bully supports in the 2012 presidential race front-page news?


Sheriff Sykes


Three of the five stories on the front of head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes' Local section are police or crime news.


The questionable police shooting of a 19-year-old black man "armed ... with tools" gets demoted to L-1 today from A-1 on Monday.


The biggest -- and only -- Hackensack news today is a photo and story on injuries to a 67-year-old man whose house was destroyed by fire (L-3).


On L-7, the first Business page, a story reports a car dealer's realty company has purchased Nisi Estiatorio, an upscale Greek fish house that has been praised by critics.


Less than a third of an acre went for $4 million. That's just what many residents lining already noisy Grand Avenue really need: another car dealer. 


Ban this word


The word "tasked" in the third paragraph of sports marketer Jim Bukata's obituary stopped me dead in my tracks (L-6).


The bureaucratic buzzword has been creeping into The Record recently and even appeared in an L-1 headline. 


Fie on "tasked." It offends the ear, and should be forever banned.


And to think the latest usage was by local obituary writer Jay Levin, normally a wordsmith and one of the paper's top reporters.


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