Showing posts with label process stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label process stories. Show all posts

Monday, February 10, 2014

Lawyers are getting much richer, taxpayers poorer

Euclid Avenue in Hackensack.Warning: One-lane road ahead.


By VICTOR E. SASSON
Editor

The sensational charges in the Bridgegate scandal have devolved into the kind of ponderous process story The Record loves to tell.

Weeks after discovery of the explosive e-mail -- "Time for some traffic problems in Fort Lee" -- the story now involves subpoenas, document production and pissing matches between high-priced lawyers, each one spouting another legal theory (A-1).

Flawed column

Today, on A-3, Washington Correspondent Herb Jackson doesn't do any heavy lifting in his NJ/DC column that purports to explore whether taxpayers will foot the bill for all of the lawyers involved on both sides of state and federal investigations.

Jackson says Governor Christie has the public picking up the $650-an-hour tab for attorney Randy Mastro, and David Wildstein is trying to hit up his former employer, the Port Authority, which isn't supported by taxes. 

But that's it from Jackson, who doesn't mention eight other figures in the probe, including former Christie aide Bridget Anne Kelly, who sent that infamous e-mail, or whether taxpayers are on the hook for their private lawyers (A-10 on Sunday).

Marty defends Chris

On Sunday, The Record's front page was dominated by a story that seemed planted by Christie's public relations machine:

The alleged "bromance" between the GOP bully and former New York Mayor Rudolph Giuliani.

Staff Writer Stephanie Akin called Giuliani "his [Christie's] biggest advocate."

Half the story

But Akin's story failed to mention that Giuliani told a radio interviewer there is a "fifty-fifty" chance Christie was aware of the Kelly discussions that led to George Washington Bridge lane closures.

Geraldo Rivera's interview of Giuliani was reported on Jan. 30 by The Huffington Post.

The early September gridlock in Fort Lee may have been political payback for the refusal of the borough's Democratic mayor to endorse Christie for a second term.  

No editing

"Fifty-fifty" is far from The Record's portrayal of Giuliani in that Sunday takeout by one of its so-called stars:

The former mayor is Christie's "staunchest defender," "Giuliani's voice has been loudest" in Christie's defense, and "Giuliani's staunch advocacy."

In fact, the story is way too long and awfully repetitive, more evidence of the abysmal lack of editing and fact-checking at the Woodland Park daily, which has been run for the last two years by former Timesman Marty Gottlieb.

Wednesday, March 21, 2012

How to bore readers to death

Banoffee pie layers.
The Record is recommending a slice of banoffee pie in place of a balanced breakfast.



When editors elevate the "process" to the front page, they are delivering some of the most eye-glazing, mind-numbing stories imaginable.

Today, Editor Marty Gottlieb of The Record turns off readers with at least three process stories on his premier page -- A-1. 

His Eminence, who came to the Woodland Park daily from The New York Times, doesn't seem to know or care that the outcome is Page 1 news -- not the process leading up to it.


Police gun play

The lead story focuses on Garfield police station "protocol" and not whether two officers were justified in using deadly force when they killed Malik Williams, 19, on Dec. 10, 2011.

The big photo on Page 1 has nothing to do with North Jersey. It's yet another primary result in the excruciatingly slow process of selecting a wealthy Republican to be the party's presidential nominee.


Only lawyers and judges will read more than a few sentences about Dharun Ravi's "strategy" in appealing his conviction for bias intimidation, which led to the death of Ridgewood's Tyler Clementi.


Quoting experts


Process stories have another thing in common, besides being boring: 


They often are based on quotes from "experts," such as Eugene O'Donnell, whose affiliation consumes nearly four sentences in the second paragraph of the lead A-1 story on Williams, the black teen from Garfield.


On the front of Local, head Assignment Editor Deirdre Sykes signed off on another Road Warrior column based entirely on readers' e-mails about MVC lines and other minutiae (L-1).


How many of the e-mails are real and how many are fabricated by a columnist desperate to fill space three times a week -- under Sykes' wet-noodle lashes?


Where is Stanley?


The Record was responsible for getting Stanley Kowalski, an 82-year-old homeless man who almost blew himself up, evicted from a motel last week. 


Today, an L-3 story reports Kowalski has been moved to a nursing home from a hospital.


A follow-up story on Thursday will discuss whether he is having regular bowel movements.


Another crash photo


Sykes needed another non-fatal accident photo to fill out L-3 today after her lazy, incompetent minions failed to produce any news from Hackensack and many other towns.


Cardiac-surgery units at Englewood Hospital and Medical Center, and other hospitals, are preparing beds after Food Editor Susan Leigh Sherrill published a pie recipe that calls for two sticks of butter and one cup of heavy cream (F-1 and F-2).


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